My Final Edit Draft

Things to change:

• Start with a fade from black
• Start audio when the screen is black
• Stake the same audio on top to get a clearer sound
• In Flash backs don´t start from black
• Some shots are to short
• Titles: An "....." Production Film, In Association with "....."
• Staring first unless evidenced why not.
• When there is an unknown actor have "Introducing"
• In flash back have the bow shot one long shot not 2 split shots
• Make sure there is no shaky cam
• Try and use the same shots twice, go back to the original shot
• Try with sound track (best if created not already created)